Gloomy Sunday
setting itself against
death making it look retarded.
'Yes, I totally agree.'
Why does it rain so much?
It seems to go on and never stop.
Rain sucks! Why can't it be snow!
With snow you can at least make things in it.
Snow is worse, then we have to bundle all up.
So, then you can wear your new velcro boots.
But what if you don't have velcro boots?
Then run room, run home and grab a gun.
Yeah and shoot yourself with it.
Or shoot my neighboor's dog for barking too much.
Rain drops keep hitting my head
does the umbella have a hole?
The wind cuts into my soul,
with the poor dead worms on the wet pavement.
look at that guy he looks like a donkey.
Eww, look at his eye
How weird his eye was,
or how ugly his face looked.
His face looked really horrible!
Like the face of Susie when she wakes up in the morning.
This is my redo of one the poems the class came up with.
About Me

- Kit
- Hi the name is Georgie, but just call me Kit everyone else does. I am 21 and living large. ^_^ I am in college to become a vet tech, why you ask because i love animals. That is prolly the reason why most people become one. I have a zoo at my house, i have four cats, two dogs, three rabbits, fish, and an Iguana. My cat (Squeeker) is with me here at college. I was born in Italy, but raised in a small town called Afton (yeah i am sure most never heard of it). Hmmm...what else can i say, well i can be shy but once you get to know me i can be pretty cool. At least i think i am can be. hee
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He should have left it uneditted, I think it would have been better. :P
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